Suggested copy edits to website

[SisqosDeepCuts]

Description
Logged some minor suggested edits to GDI website copy. See original alongside highlighted edits here: https://www.diffchecker.com/bvem3odm

Ask
Look over edits and decide which should be implemented, if any, then make and publish edits on the live site.

To Do

• Note which edits to publish or disregard
• Edit content in CMS
• Publish

Additional Info
I didn't touch the Donate page because Corinne was working on that verbiage :)

[corinnepw]

@SisqosDeepCuts this is awesome! I am going to check the edits and then we can separate them into issues for each page.

[kstack7]

Thanks, @corinnepw...definitely will help to have an issue per updated page :) Nice job, @SisqosDeepCuts! This is really helpful 👍

[kstack7]

nudging this issue

[NewtCobell]

I'm willing to work on this if it's still needed.

[kstack7]

Hooray! This one's a tad outdated so I'd look to HQ ( @corinnepw @GretchenLynd ) for final copy changes :)

[corinnepw]

Thanks so much, Sara! & Kristen! We will have some new language to share
very soon. Will update here and be sure to let you know.

On Tue, Oct 4, 2016 at 1:03 AM, Kristen [email protected] wrote:

Hooray! This one's a tad outdated so I'd look to HQ ( @corinnepw
https://github.com/corinnepw @GretchenLynd
https://github.com/GretchenLynd ) for final copy changes :)

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[NewtCobell]

Has there been an update on this?