clean up some wording

LoopKit · Dec 27, 2023 · 07e15dd · 07e15dd
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diff --git a/docs/build/testflight-xcode.md b/docs/build/testflight-xcode.md
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 There are several different methods for making use of TestFlight:
 
 * Test an app someone else is developing
-* Use the [Build with Browser](../gh-actions/gh-overview.md) method to build and distribute your own Loop app
-* Use TestFlight as a remote distribution (and backup) for an app you build using Xcode
+* Use the [Build with Browser](../gh-actions/gh-overview.md) method to build and distribute your Loop app to your iPhone or that of a family member
+* Use *TestFlight* as a remote distribution (and backup) for an app you build using *Xcode*
 
 This guide can also be followed to install other apps you build with *Xcode* via *TestFlight*. Examples include <code>Loop Follow</code>, <code>Loop Caregiver</code>, <code>xDrip4iOS</code> and <code>GlucoseDirect</code>.
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ In all cases, except accidental deletion of Loop or loss of phone, the Loop you
 
 ### Initial Steps
 
-Before creating or uploading to a TestFlight, use the [Build with *Mac*](../build/overview.md) guide to [sign your targets](../build/build-free-loop.md#select-signing-capabilities-tab) and build Loop to a [simulator phone](../build/build-free-loop.md#build-to-a-simulator) in Xcode. This checks to ensure the app you upload to your TestFlight will work as expected.
+Before creating the app or uploading it to *TestFlight*, use the [Build with *Mac*](../build/overview.md) guide to [sign your targets](../build/build-free-loop.md#select-signing-capabilities-tab) and build Loop to a [simulator phone](../build/build-free-loop.md#build-to-a-simulator) in Xcode. This checks to ensure the app you upload to your TestFlight will work as expected.
 
 ### Archive the Project
 

diff --git a/docs/faqs/new-phone.md b/docs/faqs/new-phone.md
@@ -27,9 +27,10 @@ Update your old phone to the latest iOS the hardware supports - this simplifies
     * The *Loop* app will install from *TestFlight* onto the most recent iOS
     * If a new version is available, we recommend updating and building to the latest [Update with Browser](../gh-actions/gh-update.md)
 
-!!! abstract "New Phone Checklist for Build with *Mac* Method Build"
+!!! abstract "New Phone Checklist for Build with *Mac*"
     * Are your [Mac and Xcode versions](../build/xcode-version.md#how-do-all-the-minimum-versions-relate-to-each-other) compatible with the latest iOS version?
-    * If not, you should configure and build the app with [Build with Browser](../gh-actions/gh-overview.md)
+    * If not, you need to install the correct versions on your *Mac*
+    * If you cannot do that, you should consider [Build with Browser](../gh-actions/gh-overview.md)
 
 ### Different Developer ID
 

diff --git a/docs/gh-actions/gh-update.md b/docs/gh-actions/gh-update.md
@@ -389,4 +389,4 @@ Scroll all the way to the top of the screen and tap on your LoopWorkspace link.
 
 ## Build Development Version
 
-The information to build a development (`dev` or any other branch) has been moved to a new page: [Build Loop dev with Browser](build-dev-browser.md)
+The information to build a development (`dev` or any other branch) has been moved to a new page: [Build dev with Browser](build-dev-browser.md)
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		## Build Development Version

		The information to build a development (`dev` or any other branch) has been moved to a new page: [Build Loop dev with Browser](build-dev-browser.md)
		The information to build a development (`dev` or any other branch) has been moved to a new page: [Build dev with Browser](build-dev-browser.md)