Update other-networks.qmd to refine language and structure (#81)

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@@ -4,18 +4,20 @@ title: "Relation to other networks"
 
 ## Relation to other networks
 
-Packages on R-universe may also also exist on other networks, such as CRAN or Bioconductor.
+Packages on R-universe may also exist on other networks, such as CRAN or Bioconductor.
 
-Note that CRAN is not meant to be the only CRAN-style package repository, as [explained by CRAN co-founder Kurt Hornik in his useR! 2024 keynote](https://static.sched.com/hosted_files/userconf2024/41/user2024_CRAN.pdf#page=8).
+It's important to note that CRAN is not intended to be the sole CRAN-style package repository, as [explained by CRAN co-founder Kurt Hornik in his useR! 2024 keynote](https://static.sched.com/hosted_files/userconf2024/41/user2024_CRAN.pdf#page=8).  
 
-## Can we use r-universe to host older versions of CRAN packages?
+## Can we use R-universe to host older versions of CRAN packages?
 
-This is possible, but be careful that it may not work as you expect. 
-R's `install.packages()` and `update.packages()` will always install the latest version of a package it can find in any of the available repos. 
-So the package may automatically get updated to the CRAN version on the end-user machine.
+While hosting older versions of CRAN packages on R-universe is technically possible, it may not work as intended.  
 
-## Can we use r-universe to host a fork of a CRAN package?
+- R's `install.packages()` and `update.packages()` functions will always install the latest version of a package available across all configured repositories.  
+- As a result, the older version hosted on R-universe might be automatically updated to the latest CRAN version on the user’s machine.  
 
-This is possible but generally a bad idea. 
-Your package may automatically get overwritten by the CRAN version of the package the next time the user runs `install.packages()` or `update.packages()`. 
-Also note that other packages may depend on this package, and might not be compatible with your fork.
+## Can we use R-universe to host a fork of a CRAN package?
+
+Hosting a fork of a CRAN package on R-universe is possible but generally not recommended.
+
+- The CRAN version of the package may overwrite your fork when the user runs `install.packages()` or `update.packages()`.  
+- Additionally, other packages depending on the original CRAN package may not be compatible with your fork, leading to potential issues.